Many people have a critical message to deliver, but are not sure they can find the ‘write’ words. 

When President and CEO Jennifer Wesselhoff took a new position in Utah, she drafted a resignation letter she felt needed my review.  Comparing side by side, you can see how I helped Jennifer express her thoughts more precisely in this critical communication:

CEO Resignation_Before_After

 

The new Communications Manager  wasn’t sure she could optimally organize her first press release and create the right internal quotes.  I helped:

Traffic_Tax_Before_AfterCEO Resignation_Before_AfterNewsRelease_Before_After_EMMA

 

The City of Sedona asked the Chamber to submit a letter to the City Council supporting a Transit Manager position and an extension of a transportation sales tax.  I reviewed the draft, adding added new arguments, background information and a compliment to the Council on a recent city transportation project.  The Transit Manager position was approved an the tax extended:

Traffic_Tax_Before_After